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The Verdant Butterfly's avatar

This was absolutely stunning. The imagery wrapped around me like heat off the pavement, familiar, nostalgic, and just a little off. You captured that breathless, liminal space of childhood summer and folded it into something dark and magical. The pacing, the transformation, the Ringmaster’s sorrowful recognition, it all gave me chills. I’ll be thinking about Leah and that tent for a long, long time. Bravo.

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Anndrais mac Choluim's avatar

Beautiful prose. And I like your style.

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